April Moore and Folsom’s 93

Business Writing Coach Long-time readers already know my pal April Moore, an astonishingly fun and interesting woman considering her fascination with men executed in Folsom Prison.

Her book Folsom’s 93 is available right now at Amazon, nearly two years after being picked up by a publisher and many years after April started the project.

She’s now busily promoting the heck out of it, but had time in her schedule to answer a few questions about the book, her writing and herself.

Heeeeeeeere’s April.

 

Me: You got your publishing deal a little more than a year before the book came out. Could you tell us a bit about what happened in between?

April: Well, after my heart rate returned to normal after signing the contract, I got organized. I needed to come up with an efficient plan to finish the research and the writing. Fortunately, the layout for Folsom’s 93, lent itself nicely to be easily broken down into parts; 93 different stories meant I could tackle one story at a time and not get overwhelmed. Not that I didn’t get overwhelmed–I did at times, but having a deadline helped immensely and kept me on track. (And actually, from the time I scored the publisher until the book’s release, it was an agonizing 22 months)!

Your book is compelling, even haunting at times. How did you keep the inherent darkness of the project from clouding over your sunny personality?

Luckily for me, there’s a bit of a dark side to my sunniness. Not only am I drawn to history, historical true crime has always intrigued me. Some of the stories certainly creeped me out and there were times I just needed to get away from the research for a day or two. I seemed to constantly have several irons in the fire at once, which included illustration projects, writing a children’s book, and helping organize a writer’s conference, so I had lots to “escape” to. However, it may not have been wise to have so much going on while trying to meet a publisher’s deadline.

How many queries did you send before you got a bite from a publisher?

Initially, I went the agent route, but even though a few agents were interested in the project, I wasn’t able to entice one enough to sign me up. I decided to look into small publishers and sent my proposal to one in New York and one in California. The California one bit and I’m quite sure champagne was involved.

Your blog made a big difference when it came time to attract a publisher. Could you talk a bit about the blogging process? Any secrets for success? How much did you support the blog via social media?

It’s funny; I know a lot of writers who hate to blog. We’re writers! That’s what blogging is all about! When it comes to promoting yourself, and your writing, you really have no excuse, especially because blogging is virtually free. During my research, I came across so much interesting information about Folsom that I knew would not go into the book, so starting a blog made sense, plus I wanted to start building an audience for when the book came out. I also think that because the research process occupied so much of my time, I missed actual writing; blogging helped me stay creative. I would sometimes promote my blog on Facebook, but I typically used Twitter. The key is to not constantly tweet about yourself or your blog posts. Tweet it once, maybe twice, and in the meantime, tweet about other writing stuff and share links to other writers’ blogs; show that you support all writers, not just yourself. The perpetual self-promoter gets old real fast.

What is the one habit you would say is most responsible for you being able to call yourself a published freaking author?

Staying organized. I’ve been known to be a pile-pusher; moving piles of stuff from one room to the other, but I made it priority to keep my writing life, particularly the Folsom project, well organized. That, and dedication. I never gave up on the book because it meant a great deal to me and I believed in it o much, that I was bound and determined to make it the best it could be.

Was there any habit you had to break, or pastime you had to dial back on, to find the time and energy to become a published freaking author?

The habit I should have broken or dialed back on was not saying “no.” When a fun project or opportunity came up, I would always try to squeeze it in, telling myself that I had plenty of time. Yes, I managed to get everything done, but it nearly killed me in the process. I had to learn to manage my time more effectively and prioritize tasks. I did dial back on cocktail hour(s) which kept the brain fog away (what must Hemingway think?!)

You recently did an appearance on Good Day Sacramento, and on public radio. How did you book those gigs, and what advice would you give about them?

I’m lucky enough that my publisher has an amazing publicist who was instrumental in scheduling not only the TV and radio events, but book signings as well. We exchange promotional ideas and strategies, but he seems to make it all happen. Plus, his name is Jaguar. How could anyone say no to someone with that name? My advice when it comes to these types of gigs, is to be yourself and act natural. I know that sounds cliche, but if you know your book inside and out, and are passionate about it, then you’ll have no problem talking about it. Pretend there are no cameras or microphones and talk about your book as if you’re at a party telling someone about it. Viewers and listeners will see you as genuine and will make it a point to remember your book. Above all, be professional and gracious.

You have a fiction project on tap. Have you had time to work on it after getting Folsom published? Could you tell us about it?

I really wanted to get back to fiction for a while, but it took me two previous novel starts before finally starting one that I could work with. I’m aiming at Urban Fantasy, which is something I’ve always liked, but haven’t attempted in years. Although it’s been having an identity crisis–stuck between YA and Adult fiction, but I think I may have found a solution with New Adult, an up and coming genre that seems to be the talk of the town right now. I’m having a lot of fun with it and I really have to thank my critique group for putting up with a lot of Sh*tty First Drafts while I figured out how to ease back into fiction.

What brilliant question didn’t I ask about you or your writing?

Uh, how about . . . how did I become so brilliant? (Or at least, how do I give the illusion of brilliance?)

What’s the answer to that question?

By attending writers conferences, writing workshops, and reading . . . a lot–not just books, but other writers’ blogs. There is a great deal to learn about the craft of writing and so much of it is at our fingertips. I’ve met and learned from so many amazing people in the writing community, that I owe all of my brilliance (or illusion thereof) to their camaraderie and wisdom.

 

Read more about April at her blog. And buy her book already.

William Hertling and the Last Firewall

writing business coach Meet William Hertling. Don’t let the Portland soul patch fool you, he’s actually a really cool and smart guy I met last year at the Willamette Writers Conference. He’s the author of a series of cyberpunk novels (remember cyberpunk?) that center around the evolution of AI and what that does to human society.

Interesting stuff. I tore through the first two books, Avogadro Corp and AI Apocalypse in a day each even though I should have been doing other things.

They were solid books that explored interesting ideas with nice, tight pacing, but they left me wanting more in both the good and the bad sense. Good because I wanted to read more about the world, people and ideas William was exploring. Bad because I felt both books needed to be about 20% bigger to explore the ideas more completely, realize the characters more compellingly and make the problems and obstacles a bit more robust.

William had already written The Last Firewall by the time I told him this, but it’s like he was reading my mind. Definitely the work of a maturing author, Firewall weaves three storylines into a single, interlinked narrative that comes together in exactly the right way at exactly the right time. Over on his blog, he quotes my alter ego Jake F. Simons as saying it’s like a cross between Tom Clancy and William Gibson. He (I) meant that.

This is the work of a smart, engaged writer nearing the top of his game. He should be encouraged. If you love cyberpunk or technothrillers, start with Avogadro Corp and keep on reading. If you can take or leave those, but like Tom Clancy or Walter Jon Wiliams, start with Firewall and backfill if it blows you away. Although the events are sequential, you don’t need to have read the first books to understand and enjoy the third. 

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Why Do You Write?

Business Writing CoachThis last weekend, I was privileged to meet hundreds of writers, aspiring writers, publishers, business writing coaches like me, agents and editors at the 44th annual Willamette Writers Conference. My talk on building writing platforms got a lot of compliments, and nobody threw anything at me other than questions.   As always, my takeaway was twofold:

1. Writers are really cool to hang out with.

2. Few writers have a business approach to their writing.

It’s point two that I try to fix as a business writing coach, and here in this blog. Today, let’s start at the beginning…since I’m sure a lot of folks who I just met this weekend will want to start there. Like Stephen Covey tells us in his classic The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People, we begin with the end in mind. That means you start envisioning your writing business by deciding why it it you want to write. Here are a handful of reasons I heard at the con:

  • “I want to see my work in print”
  • “I want a deal with a big six publisher”
  • “I want to quit my day job”
  • “I want my brother to be jealous”
  • “I don’t want to spend so much time not writing.”
  • “I love to write.”
  • “I love the flexibility of writing for a living.”

These are all great reasons to write. Not all of them are great reasons to write professionally. If you simply love to write and enjoy your job there’s little value in sacrificing that security just to write more. There’s even risk of losing some of your love for writing if you have to do it every day instead of get to do it when you want. Different reasons also help you make the right decision about how to act in your writing career. If you want to see your work in print, taking advantage of the self-publishing and e-publishing platforms is a completely valid approach. If your goal is to make your brother jealous via a deal with a big six publisher, not so much. Business Writing Coach Take some time to really think about why you write now, why you want to write for a living, and what you hope to get out of a freelance writing career. All of your decisions about how and what to write should stem from those reasons. Encapsulate them in a mission statement that you can review whenever your motivation starts to flag.     So, friends and readers, why do you write? Will any of that change if you go full-time? Have your reasons changed over the course of your writing career so far?  

6 Ways to Screw Up Your Writing Conference

Business Writing Coach Folks who’ve been paying attention know I’m a big fan of conferences. I’ve said it before and will say it again, writing conferences will give you more information and introduce you to more people who can help your career than all the MFAs Full Sail University can talk you into buying.

A week from today, I’ll be presenting at the Willamette Writers Conference, as will my buddy John Ellis and a few dozen other smart folks. We’ll be packed into the hotel with hundreds of people who work as writers, editors, agents and others who serve the writing and publishing industries.

You should go to conferences, but you should do it right when you go. Make your next con your best ever by avoiding these rookie mistakes.

1. Sit in the Back Row

Yes, the information at conference classes is great and you can learn everything from the back that you do at the front. But you won’t make eye contact with the presenter. If you don’t do that, it’s harder to buy him a beer after and strike up a conversation with somebody who knows stuff you want to learn and likes to talk about that stuff. Sit in front. Make the connection.

2. Sleep Off Site

The best action in a writing conference happens after hours. As a writing and business coach, it’s where I give the most free advice. As a working writer, it’s where I’ve found the best connections. Every con has a room, table, bar or restaurant where the after party rolls. Sleeping on site means you can stay there as long as you want and talk to as many people as possible.

3. Bring Your Friends

The main point of going to a conference is to meet new people and make new connections. If you bring buddies, you’re more likely to just hang out together and not do that. If you do go with a friend, or attend a con where you find a friend of yours through no fault of your own, agree to spend some time together and the rest of your time talking to strangers.

4. Don’t Take Notes

You will be drinking from an information fire hose the entire weekend. By Monday you’ll be hard pressed to list what presentations you went to, let alone what was in them. Take notes in all of them. Also, scribble a sentence or two on the back of each business card you collect, enough information to remind you why you want to contact that person later.

5. Forget Your Business Card

On the topic of business cards, bring yours. Bring extras. Pass them out like candy. It breaks the ice, tells people how to contact you and encourages them to pass you their information. More importantly, it makes you look and feel like a pro. Since writing is one of the few industries where conference attendees wish they were professionals in the field, this alone will make you stand out.

6. Be Shy

Or unenergetic, or inclined to hang out in your hotel room the whole time. If you’re naturally gregarious, this is easy. If not, challenge yourself to talk to a minimum number of strangers every hour, or every meal. Reward yourself with five minutes of “you time” when you succeed. The people you meet are absolutely the most important aspect of con attendance, so make sure you meet people.

Readers who’ve been to cons, what advice would you give to newbies. Readers who haven’t, what are your biggest hopes and fears about your first con?

 

 

3 Ways Writers Can Own SEO

SEO BloggingBusiness writers know that over the past two years, Google has made changes to her search algorithms that are bad news to many SEO pros. But it’s good news for writers. Those changes penalized sites for using black hat and grey hat tricks that gamed the system, and rewarded sites that have clever, useful and engaging content. Put another way, Google gives preferential treatment to websites that contain well-written words. There’s more to it than that, of course, but the bottom line is the Internet is now a writer’s best playground ever. Here are five ways you can use that to your advantage for yourself and your clients. 1. Write Really, Really Well Yeah, this one’s kind of a “well, duh” statement, but it’s been missing from SEO for a few years now. Any business writing — whether it’s you for a client or you for your own writing business — now depends on making your words as tight, as effective, as interesting as possible. Good words foster engagement, interest and repeat visits. Bad writing is bad business. 2. Play the Keyword Game Keywords are the grammar of business writing for the web. If you put them in your writing, Google notices what you’re doing and lets others know what you’re writing about. If you don’t, Google has no idea what your brilliant words are supposed to do. SEO expert and web development advisor John Ellis recommends writing your piece first, then rewriting with keywords in mind. I find I can get them in there on my first pass. Either way, it’s kind of a fun word game getting your keywords in place without turning your prose into tortured sentences. I’m going for a two-word keyword phrase on this one. Can you tell what it is? 3. Engage, Engage, Engage Your words aren’t going to speak for themselves. The business of writing in the 21st century demands that you publicize your own words. For everything you write, I recommend the following steps.

  1. Identify the URL for the piece, or for the owner if it’s in print.
  2. Write a 200-word blurb about it and post it on your Google+ account, with a link to the URL and a question that encourages comment.
  3. Mention it on your Facebook or Twitter feeds, again with a question or other action that encourages engagement. Do not ask for likes or shares. Instead ask a meaningful question for people to answer.
  4. Engage vigorously with whatever others have to say about your content. Foster further conversation. Start an argument. Anything to keep the comments coming.
  5. For about one-quarter to one-half of your work, repeat steps 2 through 4 in about a month. For about ten percent of your work, keep repeating steps 2 through 4 once every four to six months.

If you do these three things, Google will eventually notice you. That’s good for your business, good for your writing, and good for your clients. It’s a win-win-win. What could be better than that. SEO is a controversial topic, even among the top-level experts. What do you think about this plan? Do you do something similar? If not, what do you do differently?